I'm a little late, but I love this fic. Seriously, I love Lyra/ Red because it's a lot of fun to write and read, and this was great! I love the thought of Red and Lyra dancing- too cute! And I love love love the fact that she learns how to direct her pokemon with her body because I totally believe in that piece of fanon as far as Red goes. So, it may be unpolished, but there are some really adorable and really nice moments in here. You're a talented writer.
Keep writing!
Sofia